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Due Attention Should Be Given to Spelling

如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写；

出现这种情况的原因；

这种现象导致的结果；

Nowadays fewer and fewer students pay attention totheir word-spelling. According to a recent survey, there is a dramatic increase in the number of studentswho can only imitate the pronunciation of a wordbut be incapable of spelling it. In this essay I will discuss the factors of this phenomenon and offer my own view on it.

be capable of，能够 = can do = sth enable sb to do

be incapable of，不能 = can not do

描述现象功能句：当今，越来越少的学生注意...，根据最近的调查，有越来越多的学生（定语从句）能够做...而不能做...。这篇文章，我主要讨论这个现象并且给出我的观点

There are a number of factors can be accountable for this situation. One of the most common factors is thatfewer and fewer students need to write English essays.Besides, the goal of most students to learn English isto speakit and pass the examination which meansthey just need to select the similar words according to the listening materials and passages.

分析原因功能句：有很多原因导致这个现象，首先...

语法亮点：功能句的套用；非谓语动词作表语；定语从句的使用；

Perhaps the most contributing factor isthe wide use of electronic devices such as e-dictionaries and computers andstudents no longer need to correct the words by themselves.

no longer need to，不再做...

分析原因功能句：也许最主要的原因是

语法亮点：原因功能句的套用；举例子；并列结构；

As far as I'm concerned, I firmly argue that we need to attach great importance toword-spelling. To the students, they should write English as much as they can. Meanwhile, to the teachers, the dictationsshould be reinforcedin the class.

个人观点功能句：在我看来，我认为我们应该重视...

语法亮点：功能句的套用；固定表达的使用as much as they can；被动语态的应用should be reinforced；

Due Attention Should Be Given to the Study of Chinese

近年来在学生中出现了忽视中文学习的现象；

出现这种现象的原因和后果；

我认为...

In recent years,the ignorance of Chinese has been prevailing among students.Some refuse to go to the Chinese classes, and some read few Chinese classics.In contrast, more and more students attach more importance toforeign language study.

描述现象功能句：最近几年，...已经在...越来越流行，相反，很多人却重视...

语法亮点：功能句的套用；否定表达的多样refuse to；

There are three premier factors that can account for such phenomenon. First and foremost, the globalization greatly stimulates the students' craze for learning English, which in turn affect students' passion for studying Chinese. Moreover,fewer and fewer universities motivate students to study Chinese.

stimulate = promote = encourage

分析原因功能句：有三个主要原因导致这个现象，第一、第二、第三

语法亮点：分析原因功能句；词汇的精准表达；

Last but not least, the increasing emphasis on such"practical projects" as foreign language closely related tohunting jobs also cut into students' time and energy. Therefore, students' weakness in Chinese would undoubtedlynot only lead to their ignorance of Chinese culturebut alsohinder the study of other projects.

last but not least = the last = the last but not the least，前面有the后面就有the；

观点结论功能句：最后，强调...和...是有紧密的关系的，...毫无疑问不仅会...还会...

语法亮点：功能句的套用；并列结构的使用；

In my view, effective measures are called for to solve the problem. First, it should be made clear to the whole society that Chinese is one indispensable part of our culture and race. Second, schools should attach more importance to theteaching of Chinese.Third, students should enhance their awareness of the importance of mastering their mother tongue.

somthing important = importance of sth.

解决问题功能句：在我看来，需要采取措施解决这个问题，首先，全社会需要...，学校应该...，学生应该...

语法亮点：功能句的套用；被动句；

Should Parents Send Their Kids to Art Classes?

近年来在很多家中出现了给孩子报名课外艺术班的现象；

出现这种现象的原因和后果；

我认为...

Nowadaysmore and moreparents send their kids to various art classes after school or at weekends.Some people are strongly against this phenomenon becausethey worry that attending art classes will deprive children of their joy and freedom in childhood.

various = plenty of

because = in that = seeing that = considering that

观点阐述功能句：很多人反对这个现象，因为...

语法亮点：比较结构的句型；原因状语从句；宾语从句；非谓语动词的使用（作主语）；

However others are firmly in favor of this behavior because they believe art training is useful for a child's development. I agree with the latter because attending art classesbenefits children in may aaspects.

in favor of，支持|赞同|有利于；

latter，后者的；former，前者的；

但是，其他人坚定的支持这个行为，因为他们认为...我同意后面的观点，因为它会使...在很多方面获益；

语法亮点：原因状语从句；宾语从句；非谓语动词作主语；

First, art classes can help to explore children's art potentials. The earlierthe children are exposed to arts, the more likelyit is to find out the artistic potential hidden in them. Even if they fail to become great artists, their interests in arts, say, in music, cultivated inchildhood will be of great value in their whole life.

explore，探讨，探究，考察，探索；

expose，暴露，揭露；

dispose，处理，放置，安排；

impose，强制推行，强加于；打扰，麻烦；

cultivate，开垦，耕作，栽培，培育；

be of value = valuable，珍贵的，值钱的，be of + n.用来替代adj.；

首先，艺术班可以帮助他们...越早...越可能...，即使他们没有...，也对他们的一生都是有价值的；

语法亮点：can help to；the earlier..., the more likely...；even if they fail to；

Second, art classes can enrich a child's life.Since born, children will have to face a severe competition and bear a lot of pressure. Most children are buriedin piles ofhomework day after day,with no time toenjoy themselves,which makes their life dull and boring. Attending art classes will enable children to relax themselves and enjoy a colorful childhood.

a pile of，一堆；

其次，艺术班可以丰富孩子们的生活，自从出生，孩子们就不得不面临激烈的竞争及承受相当大的压力。所有的孩子每天都有很多的作业，没有时间娱乐，这使他们的生活枯燥无聊。参加艺术班可使他们放松自己并且享受快乐的童年。

Since art classes are important in children's development, parents can send their children to art classes according to their children's interest.

are important = be of importance；

既然艺术班对孩子的成长如此重要，家长就应该根据孩子的兴趣把他们的孩子送云兴趣班。