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雅思写作Task1

Simon Lesson 1：课程目标

• 方法和技巧
• 将任务进行不同样例的解读
• 问题的类型

1、如何写好task1：

• task1的要求是形容你看到的图表，写一封报告，而不要给观点。

也即不要试图分析这种趋势背后的原因

• 不要给结论，但是可以做一个总结（在overview部分）

2、Task1的六种题型：

对于前四种题型所用的技巧和方法都完全一致：

• 描述
• 对比
• 对于变化或趋势做出说明

第五种其实使用的语言相似
第六种流程图就格外不同，后面会专门讲到

3、Task1的四段式结构：

• Introduction
  

• Overview
  

• Details
  

Simon Lesson 2：Line graphs

1、概述：

通常线条图会有三四条线段，x轴为时间变换，y轴为数量变换。我们的任务就是对比这些线段，而非分开描述每一条。

2、两点原则：

• 进行总体上的比较：summary/overview paragraphs

选择总体上非常一致的现象，例如蓝色线条在很长的时间内都比其他的要高

• 比较特定点的线条：details paragraphs

选择局部的时间点，例如最开始的时间点、蓝色线和绿色线的交点及之后的发展趋势、每个线段的峰值以及长期稳定不变的时间

Simon给出的建议是：因为字数的限制，我们不能够描述所有的事情，因此每条线至少写一件事，并且进行相关比较

3、Line graphs案例展示：

3.1 Introduction：对于问题进行意译

3.2 Overview：2句话、2个观点

It is clear that nuclear power was by far the most important means of electricity generation over theperiod shown. Renewables provided the lowestamount of electricity in each year.

3.3 Details 1：

选取开始的时间点和Nuclear超越Thermal的时间点作为本段的内容

In 1980, thermal power stations were the mainsource of electricity in France, generating around 120 terawatt hours of power. Nuclear and hydroelectric power stations produced just under75 terawatt hours of electricity each, and renewables provided a negligible amount.

Just one year later, nuclear power overtook thermal poweras the primary source of electricity.

Tips:

3.4 Details 2:

记住一开始的建议，每条线至少写一件事，因此Simon选取了如下四个区域

Between 1980 and 2005, electricity production from nuclear power rose dramatically to a peak of 430 terawatt hours.

By contrast, the figure forthermal power fell to only 50 terawatt hours in 1985, and remained at this level for the rest of the period.

Hydroelectric power generation remainedrelatively stable, at between 50 and 80 terawatthours, for the whole 32-year period, but renewable electricity production saw only a small rise toapproximately 25 terawatt hours by 2012.

Simon Lesson 3: 条形图

1、概述：

条形图可以展示一段时间内的数量变化，这种条形图和线图完全一致

但是条形图有时候只展示数量，这种我们就需要新的策略

2、原则：

• 进行总体上的比较（不给出数字）：summary/overview paragraphs

例如对于Shop A，Mobile售卖的数量最多；但是对于Shop B，四种商品售卖的差不多

• 对比特定的数字：details paragraphs

3、Bar chart案例展示：

3.1 Introduction：

3.2 Overview：2句话、2个观点

It is clear that Nokia sold the most mobile phones between 2009 and 2011, but Samsung became the best selling brand in 2013. Samsung and Apple saw the biggest rises in sales over the 5-year period.

3.3 Details

Simon在这里计划将Details的两个段按照项的划分进行分类。Details 1计划使用Samsung 和 Nokia，因为这两个品牌在三年中都是销量最高的存在。

• Details 1：对于大部分时间内的对比，变化
  

In 2009, Nokia sold close to 450 million mobile phones, which was almost double the number of handsets sold by the second most successful manufacturer, Samsung.

Over the following four years, however, Nokia's sales figures fell by approximately 200 million units, whereas Samsungsaw sales rise by a similar amount. By 2013, Samsung had become the market leader with sales reaching 450 million units.

• Details 2：
  

The other three top selling mobile phone brandsbetween 2009 and 2013 were LG, ZTE and Apple.

In 2009, these companies sold around 125 million,50 million and 25 million mobile handsets respectively, but Apple overtook the other two vendors in 2011.

In 2013, purchases of Apple handsets reached 150 million units, while LG saw declining sales and the figures for ZTE rose only slightly.

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From： https://www.cnblogs.com/cauwj/p/17073777.html