1 写作要求
假如你是李华，你的美国笔友吉姆对中国传统文化很感兴趣。请你用英文介绍一下中国的传统节日——春节的情况。思路点拨：
1 总体概述：春节是一个传统节日及其时间；
2 简要介绍人们在春节到来前的活动；
3 主要介绍人们在春节期间的活动。
2 优秀范文
The Spring Festival
The Spring Festival is the most important traditional festival in China, which comes in January or February.
Before the Spring Festival, people buy new clothes and clean their houses. People who live or work away from their hometowns will go back.
On New Year’s Eve, all the family members get together to enjoy a big dinner and watch Spring Festival Gala. People also let off fireworks. The elderly give red packets to children. During the Spring Festival, people visit their relatives and friends, and have meals with them.
3 翻译、句子结构
The Spring Festival is the most important traditional festival in China, which comes in January or February.
春节是中国最重要的传统节日，通常在一月或二月到来。
主语(The Spring Festival)，谓语(is)，表语(the most important traditional festival)，状语(in China)，定语从句(which comes in January or February)。
从句主语(which)，谓语(comes)，状语(in January or February)。
Before the Spring Festival, people buy new clothes and clean their houses.
春节前，人们会购买新衣服并打扫房屋。
状语(Before the Spring Festival)，主语(people)，谓语(buy)，宾语(new clothes)；谓语(clean)，宾语(their houses)。
People who live or work away from their hometowns will go back.
那些在家乡以外生活或工作的人会回家。
主语(People)，定语从句(who live or work away from their hometowns)，谓语(will go back)。
从句主语(who)，谓语(live or work)，状语(away from their hometowns)。
On New Year’s Eve, all the family members get together to enjoy a big dinner and watch Spring Festival Gala.
在除夕夜，所有家庭成员会聚在一起享用丰盛的晚餐并观看春节联欢晚会。
状语(On New Year’s Eve)，主语(all the family members)，谓语(get together)，状语(to enjoy a big dinner and watch Spring Festival Gala)。
People also let off fireworks.
人们还会燃放烟花。
主语(People)，谓语(let off)，宾语(fireworks)。
The elderly give red packets to children.
老人会给孩子们发红包。
主语(The elderly)，谓语(give)，宾语(red packets)，状语(to children)。
During the Spring Festival, people visit their relatives and friends, and have meals with them.
在春节期间，人们会拜访亲戚朋友，并与他们共进餐。
状语(During the Spring Festival)，主语(people)，谓语(visit)，宾语(their relatives and friends)；谓语(have meals)，状语(with them)。
4 句子逻辑
第一句介绍了春节的重要性和时间。
第二句描述了春节前的准备工作。
第三句讲述了在外工作或生活的人会回家过年。
第四句至第五句描述了除夕夜的活动，包括家庭聚餐、观看春晚和燃放烟花。
第六句描述了春节期间的红包习俗。
第七句讲述了春节期间的社交活动，如拜访亲戚朋友和共进餐。
5 高分句型
The Spring Festival is the most important traditional festival in China, which comes in January or February.
（定语从句）
People who live or work away from their hometowns will go back.
（定语从句）
6 作文点评
优点
主题明确：文章围绕“春节”这一主题展开，主题明确。
内容丰富：详细介绍了春节前的准备、除夕夜的活动和春节期间的习俗，内容丰富。
结构清晰：文章有明确的开头、中间和结尾，逻辑性强。
语言简洁：使用了简洁明了的语言，易于理解。
不足
词汇和句式多样性：虽然文章内容丰富，但可以增加一些高级词汇和复杂句式，以提升文章的表达效果。
深度分析：文章虽然介绍了春节的习俗，但缺少对这些习俗背后文化和历史意义的深入探讨。